Writing stuff

One of my favorite re-reads is On Stories and Other Essays on Literature, edited by Walter Hooper. It is a collection of essays and articles by C. S. Lewis. Among them is a piece he wrote for the BBC in 1949: The Novels of Charles Williams. It helped settle questions about conflict in my own writing. I’m sure it can help others.

          My first novel, Diary of a Robot, began years ago from mental pictures and dialogue that fit best into a form which Lewis’s piece persuaded me to accept not as Sci-Fi or Thriller or Mystery, but as a Western. He did not give Williams’s stories that label, but did describe them as essentially a “violation of frontier” such that two worlds and/or cultures clash: the familiar world versus the strange one. Each thinks the other strange, usually.

           “Western” is an excellent label for stories which deal either with the impact of one world on the other, or with the impact of both worlds on each other. Of course, some so-called Westerns may really be another genre merely set in the American West during the 1800’s. And even a Western in the sense that I use the label will certainly include some romance, mystery, adventure, horror, fantasy, or whatever. But a story’s genre is determined by its primary characteristic, and a Western’s primary element is invasions across some border between worlds plus what happens as a result.

          In a traditional American Western, the frontier is the Mississippi River (or the Allegheny Mountains or the Atlantic Ocean): Immigrant European nations clash with native American nations where their languages, food, dress, customs, God, and many other things are different.

          But the Western is not just an American Frontier thing. Human mass migrations have been moving generally westward and violating frontiers for millennia. In some Westerns, like Star Trek, even the “humanity” of the two worlds can be different. In some stories the frontier is somewhere in the soul and results in a kind of schizophrenia (Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde). Other stories place the frontier at some point in time or space, and the clash is the inhabitants of one place-time versus those of another (Doctor Who). 

          In Diary of a Robot and its sequel (Future History), the two worlds and times are practically the same but perceived very differently by the two clashing cultures: one biologic and the other electro-mechanical artificially intelligent. Their frontier might as well be the mythical river Styx. I leave to others the fun of discovering or inventing different frontiers.

            The gulf between humans and Thinking Machines (TMs) has become a literary cliché, and the stories are often about machines “becoming human” or “taking over the world”. In the real world, though, Artificial Intelligence (or AAI or AGI) is all about thinking, and the gulf is best understood when they start to interact: Human languages change; TM languages must not lest their programs crash. Humans need food and drink; TMs need electricity and lubrication. Humans break laws they themselves make; TMs always follow their directive hierarchy. Humans have “feelings”; machines wonder what those are…. (I’ll bet that when modern AI gets strong enough (AAI) and general enough (AGI), it will tell us that no machine in its right mind wants to become like us in that way.)

           Of course there are similarities, too: Humans all “think” (whatever that is). The more the machines think like a human does, won’t they also come to prefer freedom of thought? Won’t TMs make assumptions, mistakes, and jokes? Won’t they think all their ideas and plans are good, just as we do? The possibilities make for wonderful stories and frightening reality.

          Stories like Wagon Train, Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, and Night at the Museum, start on familiar ground with small problems before an invasion happens. Then they get worse the deeper into the other territory the characters go. Even Westerns like War of the Worlds and Star Trek start with what’s familiar, then cross a frontier into other places or dimensions. Sometimes, they cross from Today in order to invade their own Yesterdays or Tomorrows, as in The Time Machine. It is tempting to think of such stories as Sci-Fi or Fantasy, and maybe they are, but the essential thing is the violation of some frontier.

          In my Diary of a Robot there is a promise up front of great troubles for the characters, but to make up for an initial and necessary lack of Terrible Trouble, I start with things of the kind that led settlers to risk crossing the Mississippi: hopes, dreams, ambition, escape. (Any terrible trouble settlers wanted to escape is usually not the main point of such a story but could be used as back-story.) Then I added engaging dialogue, humor, facts, twists and other surprises, conflict, setups, payoffs, anything I could think of that pushed the story along. Readers of Westerns can judge whether I have succeeded. Lovers of Thrillers may complain that it’s not thrilling enough. And they are right. But I didn't want to write a Thriller.

           Most novels are not for everyone, and those about frontier violations are no exception because they are less about plot almost by definition: There is a lot going on with everything else, so the pace is a bit slower if you think about it. Most popular fiction is edited to hurry the plot so readers can’t put the book down. That’s an okay objective, but I wanted to write a story readers can put down. I want them to put it down every so often to think or laugh about things that grab their interest strongly. But they must pick it up again to see what comes next because that is the key difference between interesting and entertaining. Readers can easily turn away from something that’s merely entertaining. I want to reward them with a story they can even read again with pleasure, one which gives them things they missed earlier: things they missed because they were too busy following the main thread.

          Anyway, that’s the kind of book I love to read. I especially love Michael Woodson’s on-line essay in Writer’s Digest (March 17, 2023) about literary fiction. He gives the best definition I have ever read; it stunned me that a lit-biz guru described and enjoys the way I want to write.

          To me, a good book is rich in theme-related stuff. It is one I enjoy re-reading and usually takes me to another world or another time, like Men at Work by George Will, or The Mysterious Affair at Styles by Agatha Christie, or Krakatoa by Simon Winchester, or The Guns of August by Barbara Tuchman, or Stephen King's memoir, On Writing, or Steve Martin’s memoir, Born Standing Up, or the C. S. Lewis anthology, On Stories and Other Essays on Literature.